Axilus Prime Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 Come into my arms...(kills) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 Oh my, the eyes of the red guy besides TNG. They stare into my soul. Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 It seems you haven't updated that epic in a while. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 Actually, read the caption next to the chapter title. :PThat's the movie you needed help with the sound, right? Gosh, you made that fast. Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 (I'm releasing it scene-by-scene, like Dark709. Not all at once.)Yeah, but that chapter's been on your sig for a long time. (Or did you put that quote up before the actual chapter?)More than one Great Spirit? Weird.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 I put the quote up before the chapter. Think of it as a preview. The guy with the Avohkii and Lewa's body keeps reminding me of Bitil. I think it's the pose and the colours. Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 (That would be Soran.)Assassination? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 Only five? What an oddly numbered team of Toa. Although I guess it wouldn't be all that normal, given you have two yellow beings. Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 (One's a Toa of Couches, the other a Toa of Iron. Clothes Irons, that is.)Mordor, or Ta-Metru under siege? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 Toa of...couches? Suddenly I'm under the impression yours isn't a serious comic. I'm guessing that's the guy with Takanuva's mas- ...Um, the guy with Onua's body. Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 (No, it's not. The movie, however, has a serious plot with the insane powers. TNG actually has Fire, Gravity...has Gravity, and other red guy has Business. But yes, Kaio, Onua guy, is Couch Guy.) Because burning cities are very well kept secret. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vandenreich Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 And so the two giant friggin robots with opposite colored eyes had a stareing contest. While five dudes stood around them. Quote Signature Guidelines: Avatar and signature total file size may not exceed 100 KB! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 (edited) Everytime I see a picture of Batman, now all I hear is the phrase "I'm Batman", in Christian Bale's throaty roar. Edited June 17, 2012 by Grimoire Albastru Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 Oh wow, now a new preview. Looks cool to me! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 I'm still wondering why he's Tahu Nuva Golden. The guys with the Avohkii's are way more golden than he. Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen of Liars Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 The lies of Harmaisis, huh? Not so virtuous now, are we?...Harmaisis is the one the virtuous village people worshiped in your other preview, right? Quote ___ ___ ___ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 (edited) Aye, the very same. :PI don't remember any vampires having huge, angelic bird wings. Edited June 17, 2012 by Grimoire Albastru Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 Dude, that is not a cool title for a chapter. You need something shorter, catchier, like 'The Lies of Harmaisis'. Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 I like it how it is. I stretched it out because I didn't like just "The Lies of Harmaisis". If we're speaking analytically, the inclusion of his species title also gives the impression of exposure and the idea that all the details of Harmaisis will be revealed. :PFatal Error. Also known as Unfortunate Mistake and Deadly Kerfuffle. Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZTG Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 The whole city is bucked up Quote "Literature adds to reality, it does not simply describe it. It enriches the necessary competencies that daily life requires and provides; and in this respect, it irrigates the deserts that our lives have already become,"-C.S. Lewis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 Yes, but it isn't cool. Other people are going to complain as well.For instance, The Eleventh Hour's chapters will have names. The prologue is called 'The Ceremony', and the first chapter is called 'The Hosted'. Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plague Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 *Bzzzt* WARNING: FATAL ERROR *Bzzt* Quote http://www.mocpages.com/home.php/67904 < My Mocpages! My first (and currently ONLY) MOC on BZP! > http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=5426 PLAGUEAvatar pic taken [and edited] by me. DON"T STEAL IT! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 (edited) What do you mean by cool? I don't see why anyone would complain, it's not like it's written for the chapter titles. Besides the title was inspired by the novel, "The Lies of Locke Lamora" and I didn't see anyone complaining about the syllable count in that.Are those pieces grey or silver? Edited June 17, 2012 by Grimoire Albastru Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZTG Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 That city is mucked up Quote "Literature adds to reality, it does not simply describe it. It enriches the necessary competencies that daily life requires and provides; and in this respect, it irrigates the deserts that our lives have already become,"-C.S. Lewis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haecceity Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 (edited) Can't he decide on one visor colour? Edited June 17, 2012 by Temporphilic Quote If you found this text, know that Kevin isn't real. He's a fairy tale to scare children. Kevin. Is. Not. Real. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 Yet another of Barry's continuity decimating photographs. Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haecceity Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 A very logical observation, Thantox. But why do you not fear what some have already become in it? You fear for others more than you fear your worst nightmare...not the best idea. Quote If you found this text, know that Kevin isn't real. He's a fairy tale to scare children. Kevin. Is. Not. Real. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrozenFlash Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 That boy is casually crouching down. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haecceity Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 (edited) "Ignore the large gold-colored smoke clouds. Those are normal and will in no way cause you to die a slow, painful death. Trust us."- Hero Factory PA System"We repeat, do not be alarmed. In no possible way will these clouds will harm you." Edited June 17, 2012 by Temporphilic Quote If you found this text, know that Kevin isn't real. He's a fairy tale to scare children. Kevin. Is. Not. Real. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 I've just realised, with all the screens, this scene must be based off of the one that took place in Futzu Tower. That's what I love about those opening movies. Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plague Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 A city on fire. Happy!Are those pieces grey or silver?Teal. Quote http://www.mocpages.com/home.php/67904 < My Mocpages! My first (and currently ONLY) MOC on BZP! > http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=5426 PLAGUEAvatar pic taken [and edited] by me. DON"T STEAL IT! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haecceity Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 Teal-the holy grail of Technic parts colours. Quote If you found this text, know that Kevin isn't real. He's a fairy tale to scare children. Kevin. Is. Not. Real. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 (edited) Wait, really? Teal? Must be because of my phone, because I'm seeing grey.And now when I see Baion all I think of is his sound clip. "DOHNK!!!" Edited June 17, 2012 by Grimoire Albastru Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZTG Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 FIRE! Quote "Literature adds to reality, it does not simply describe it. It enriches the necessary competencies that daily life requires and provides; and in this respect, it irrigates the deserts that our lives have already become,"-C.S. Lewis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 I think his left eye need to go a little closer to his nose. It's almost fallen off of his face. Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrozenFlash Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 I knew something is up with Harmaisis! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZTG Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 Exploding rocka Quote "Literature adds to reality, it does not simply describe it. It enriches the necessary competencies that daily life requires and provides; and in this respect, it irrigates the deserts that our lives have already become,"-C.S. Lewis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrozenFlash Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 I wonder if there will be a link for the artist part. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta Luroka Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 Rocka has greenish yellow eyes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrozenFlash Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 I see the name of your comic character. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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